broken heart

heart broken.
his life forsaken.
his hope forgotten.
the wound in him suffert so bad.
he is but , but so sad....
sad,yeah he is sad but too mad
to even cry he hurt his girl
that ythe broken life whirl.
we ,his friend look at him in dispear.
he knock himself up until blood appear.
even his shadow cry...she cry for him
oh and by the way..i'm kim.
this guy is in my closest friends
i'll be here until the end.
now we, friends put him to sleep.
so weaken that he even not count the sheep.
good night have a rest.

Il est bien écrit ton poème Kim, désolée mai en ce moment c tt se ke g a dire

Très bien écrit Kim le poème!!

Magnifique vraiment!!

ouha tres beaux......